Saturday, August 29, 2015

Girl Of The Seasons Comments

Rating: 4.8

Girl of the Seasons
I think of these days -
Her loveliness is Reason,
Her reluctance dismays!
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COMMENTS
Poppy Miller 17 January 2016

Of love and the seasons are always good subjects, be they happy or sad and you have managed both. Very well executed Terry. I love the lines Her loveliness is Reason, Her reluctance dismays! & the last stanza.

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Atul Chandra Sarkar 12 November 2015

Seasons and moods, go together.......well written.

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Roseann Shawiak 18 September 2015

Wonderfully executed poem, light, airy, filled with imagery, ending on a note of sadness within, knowing you are not the one. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Kelly Kurt 12 September 2015

A lovely poem, Terry. Thanks

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Terry Dawson

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