Sunday, August 11, 2013

Girl Of The Night Comments

Rating: 4.5

Stars shining from the night of the moon
The darkness of the night
Iam thinking all the time
The cold wind moves every thing on the ground
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Messaoud Allalouche
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Palitha Ranatungen 06 September 2019

Beutifully penned. Very novel point of view about the night. Thank you for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 26 May 2018

Well conceived and elegantly brought forth with insight. Good work of art.

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Thank you very much Chinedu Dike

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Zion Anisius 05 September 2017

this poem has that kind of a message like clandestine hidden in the lost and lonely nights.. very beautiful phrases loved it

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Messaoud Allalouche 05 September 2017

thank you Anna

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Thank you so much Zion Anisius I hope to read yours too

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Messaoud. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Thank you Jahib yes I will read yours

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 11 August 2013

this is too.. it sounds like a song for me but i love your imagery thanks for sharing

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