Girl Look What You've Done To Me Comments

Very promising start, you write with great honesty but you would need to improve your English, but you write from your heart and I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems! Thank you for sharing and I'm sorry for taking so long to read your poem I have just been busy.

Though this love is like pain to you, sometimes its healthy to let go may be just may be she never loved you. Nice start Malik

Amen to what Kelly Kurt said: The message is understandable but the English needs a lot of improvement. I know it's hard when you are trying to write in a language that is other than your native one. And leave the drugs alone if you really are using them. They will destroy you, body and spirit. Also, please read Poem Hunter's rules for publishing poetry. If I remember correctly, one of the rules says not to use all capital letters. Keep writing. You will get better and better.

The message is clear but the English needs some work. I hope you aren't abusing drugs to mask pain. Please keep writing. Peace