Monday, June 26, 2006

Girl, Lindsey, By The Sea Comments

Rating: 5.0

The little girl in floral bathing wear
stretched out her arms and laughed and tried
to influence the heedless tide
that tugged at her delicate ankles and toes
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Frank Bana
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Original Unknown Girl 02 May 2007

This is absolutely beautiful, I love the images in this piece, so very wonderful. One of my favs of yours. HG: -) xx

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Ruby Root 15 September 2006

Excellent poem, Frank I love your different styles of poems. Great imagery, almost like a painting you've creating by writing.

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Joseph Daly 26 June 2006

This has a wonderful feel to it Frank. It flows effortlessly I wondered about the structure of stanzas i and two, I thought you were introducing a rhyming scheme. it may have been goodbut this piece is a very nostalgic and lovely work.

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