Sunday, March 18, 2012

Girl In The Mirror. Comments

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Every day I look in the mirror,
Expecting to like what I see.
Instead I see pain, anger and hate,
A girl that just wants to be loved.
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Normal Girl Normal World
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Edward Kofi Louis 05 December 2014

Nice piece of work. Yes, with the pains of life; however, we always have to take up the pieces and move on. Thanks for sgharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Chuy Amante 23 April 2014

You have a grand ability to show your fragility! Keep writing, it's exciting!

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Susan Lacovara 09 September 2013

Just be who your are...the world could be pleasantly surprised! We have all been that face in the mirror...as life changes, so too, , the face in the mirror. May you come to accept the beauty that is you...be your own kind of beautiful! I am brand new to this forum, yet have been writing all my life. Please feel free to comment on my poetry as I welcome new friends. PEACE

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