Girl In My Class Comments
Please don't think that low enrollment
Would cause my sparks of fascination
To be anything but widely distributed
Or that they are likely to center and flash up at one point
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I have to admit, I was entertained by this one, but the inspiration that brought forth and uplifting upbeat to your new language. I can imagine that when eyes spark for the teacher for the teaching it is inspiring to both. Beyond your outpouring of appreciative words, I enjoyed these lines: But one face has the range of an audience Ghostly-pensive or edgy-tired sometimes Yet ideas of mine keep quivering to life Whenever she beams that curious smile That keeps my words jumping to life Thanks for sharing Denis.
You were kind to read the whole things despite the muddled opening lines. I have revised the beginning since you wrote your comment.
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8/2/2025 5:13:23 AM # 1.0.0
Well, like Bri, I don’t claim to understand it, but I enjoyed the parts I understand. I imagined it was you as a boy having to stand before the class to present something, and in your nervousness, this girl’s face stood out. Sounds like you went into a trance... I love the part about “ she needs an extra note in her name...”. Many great metaphors and I like the way you coin words.
Actually, it's about me lecturing in front of a class and being inspired by the expression on a student's face. Thanks for appreciating my made-up words.