Friday, March 20, 2009

Girl In Black Comments

Rating: 5.0

she was happy
no family or face
but always sunny
turned sad and lonly
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Akira Anderson
COMMENTS

hmmmmm, i like this one.... almost my story... thanks for sharing, +10

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 30 April 2009

you are truly expressive and that is truly spectacular! u amazing!

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Wow i love how you express yourself...thx for letting us in your world, i hope things get better for you pllz rite more! ! ! DLG

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Hari Khabrani 29 April 2009

Black absorbs sun light while dark never sees sun. Distant met in poem and gloomed. Thanks. Readable. Good write.

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Daryl Young 23 March 2009

Very dark, but loving. An interesting look at a sad lonely girl, and her fate. Lovely wording. Thank you Please feel free to read and comment on my works. Rabbit

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