Thursday, March 27, 2008

Girl, How Could You Comments

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Walked down the aisle
Girl you did, by his side
Promised before God to your man
The boys came along
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Dennisa Davidson
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James B. Earley 24 April 2008

And if she had remained.............................................? Sad, though sometimes better this way. Thanks for sharing.

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Malini Kadir 03 April 2008

Touched the heart...its tone and tempo very good!

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Don Mcwilliams 27 March 2008

Heartbreaking, Dennisa. Conveys a sense of desperation. Don

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Brittany Marsh 27 March 2008

i like this. well writen piece. i couldnt stop til' the very end.

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