Friday, July 13, 2007

Girl, Fragmented Comments

Rating: 5.0

he was on the verge of the atlantic
where the coast is lined with small
hotels and families on vacation
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Melissah C 09 January 2008

I love the end, it tops the whole thing off its strange how you meet some people and never see them again, how certain things stick its like a 30 second romance

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Ivan Donn Carswell 13 July 2007

Ryan, you capture fragmentation superbly in this piece; recolletions are indeed like this. Well written. Rgds, Ivan

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