Tuesday, April 13, 2010

Girl For Sale Comments

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And there I stood,
A girl for sale,
And you couldn’t look away.
You filled my heart and soul,
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Em Jay Christian
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Marcel Tourdot 13 April 2010

I felt compelled to tell you that I found your words in 'girl for sale' to be profound. Your poem was exceptional in rhyme and tone and you were very effective in conveying the dynamics and subtle undertones to your character and her hardships. I enjoyed it immensely. Keep up the good work. Marcel

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