Monday, December 29, 2008

Girl/Boy Comments

Rating: 2.8

Girl: Hey Baby, How have you been
Boy: Hey Hun, what do you mean?
Girl: Well you’ve been acting strange
Boy: I’ve been going through some change
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COMMENTS
Kite Remedy 09 January 2009

expressive story, impressive poem after all.. nice work..

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Kesav Easwaran 30 December 2008

a very good piece...original and creative...i liked the dialogue and the narrative ending, though sad both...ten for you Amy

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