Larami loved his spots;
He thought he was a leopard.
Little did he know that they weren’t spots;
But tiny brown homes.
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this is werid but i love it :) my favorite animanl is a Giraffe!
I wouldn't call it weird, but it's hard to comprehend how hippos lived in the spots of a giraffe. Perhaps a note from the poet could explain this. The poem's user rating,4.5 from just 2 voters, seemed to me to be far below of what it deserves. I gave it 8/10. Though I did not understand fully what the poem meant, yet I liked it because: Unlike many pieces in this forum, it looks like a poem. It is well structured with proper punctuation. It has a story to tell, however fanciful, that is perhaps allegorical to the poet's philosophy of life. It ends on a happy note. Best wishes for a happy journey down the road.