Sunday, September 7, 2008

Gioconda, Mona Lisa Comments

Rating: 4.3

Gioconda, why do you smile confusing the folks and experts?
Do you stare at me, for I insist that Sundays follow Mondays?
For I consider the cloud as smoke though it rains a whole life?
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Nora Eason 27 September 2008

you are very talented

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Lauren Watkins 22 September 2008

A poem of wondeful complexity and thought, such a stream of ideas and questions. Loved it.

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Many people have pondered over the enigmatic and mysterious Mona Lisa smile for centuries.I think she was shy but there could have been other reasons.Your poem reflects a great deal of thought and is very well written.I gave you a ten.

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Joseph S. Josephides

Joseph S. Josephides

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