Sunday, March 6, 2016

Ginger Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are a dream
fallen from the sky
of my own treasure
I submerged in your arms
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M. Asim Nehal
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Michael Jack 23 July 2020

Wonderful poem, title is fascinating.10

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Darren Jkoeryo 18 March 2016

Ginger love an interesting write.

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 March 2016

Wow! ..... I love the energy and the passionate tone of this poem! Lovely!

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Valsa George 07 March 2016

The sourness, sweetness and the helplessness of being in love is expressed in beautiful images! I liked the title of the poem too! A 10

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Nosheen Irfan 07 March 2016

Another beautiful write on love. Love is often difficult..It's not always smooth n even. Enjoyed reading it. You have put your feelings into words with amazing expression.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 March 2016

Of my own treasure; with the ways of life. Nice work.

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T Rajan Evol 06 March 2016

The use of metaphor GINGER is amusing.....the features of ginger fits to love stricken people and they need bitter treatment...100

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M. Asim Nehal

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