You are a dream
fallen from the sky
of my own treasure
I submerged in your arms
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Wow! ..... I love the energy and the passionate tone of this poem! Lovely!
The sourness, sweetness and the helplessness of being in love is expressed in beautiful images! I liked the title of the poem too! A 10
Another beautiful write on love. Love is often difficult..It's not always smooth n even. Enjoyed reading it. You have put your feelings into words with amazing expression.
The use of metaphor GINGER is amusing.....the features of ginger fits to love stricken people and they need bitter treatment...100
Wonderful poem, title is fascinating.10