Monday, November 14, 2005

Gina Again Comments

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It was ecstatic electricity.
That touch of velvety, delicious skin,
the sun had, reasonably, retreated
and in the forest we felt wild and free.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Ernestine Northover 14 November 2005

That cow obviously put you in the right Moooooooood Herbert! ! ! ! ! Sincerely Ernestine

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Mary Nagy 14 November 2005

I think the tenderness between you and Gina comes acrossed very well here. Very nice poem. sincerely, Mary

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 14 November 2005

Very nice Herbert....kissing cousins. :) Story I can relate to somewhat.

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