Grey heron, on straw of boggy land,
Fry fishes are on swimming competition-
first, second, third…. to the jaw of routine
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Very heart touching and powerfully expressed! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++! ..
Mr. Civilized! Look- guest birds are flying as your jolly fowler, it's your turn all; you can hunt easily the flying by others with giggling sympathy! ! Touching expression! A beautiful poem! (10)
To the evening sky! ! ! Seeing the wickedness of mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
the umbrella meaning of the poem and its striking metaphors... a nice dramatic style poem...uncommon in words using...thanks for it to share...10
A powerful and thought provoking poem. A great satire and expose of the ills of society. So vividly depicted. Well crafted write.10
A powerful write of how human beings become less? ..........well written Mahtab
post graduate.... no job @ 32 poetry is excellent coming from you 1986 borns are fighters aren't you love independence do you
Dear Mahtab, you have so touchingly and incisively inscribed about the brutality and inhumanity in this poem. A beautiful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.10
Falcons are wearing Black Shirts and judge the sun under stormy darkness, no rains but tears are shedding as blood on frontier thorns - Very vivid and powerful lines about the cruelty of our mortally world. Some of the images(such as the jaw of routine, no massacre but the space is the sparkling showcase of superpower, etc.) are echoing in the air.
Well done on giggling sympathy, thanks for sharing, Gypsy No! -Refugee No! -Muslim......... worldwide namely humans are committing inhumanity, in real meaning their sense is cheating themselves
Rohingya Crisis is a test case for entire humanity. I wonder how a follower of Budha can be a saddist!
Another of your master piece poem; great and world appealing......God bless you