Large in frame and singing it's own windsong
Of lonliness, I see Destiny flowing,
And tinged blue. While billowing among
Shadows, strange whisperings start, below
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Beautiful wistful write Fay...I can feel the longing running through your words....Fi...10++
Beautiful expressions Fay that seem to flow so gently from your pen....10+++++
Beautiful write Fay, each line flows into the next, meaningful and heartfelt, 10 Lynda xx
This is so full of meaning for so many Fay, beautiful write as always lady...10
Release me With more taste of sweet love. I need relief... ..................................................................... Fay, Good phrase, with deep implied sense... 10... All best, Tsira
Fay. i just woke.. well. itis 2: 02 Am.. and something told me, Fay posted.. I had to read.. God knows why.. beautiful.. I like this! ! been there, will rise
the context is meaningful...emotionally narrated well..great poem...10
A very good write with very meaningfull expressions.. You have given this a very emotional feel....
Exceptional title. You have written your longing into every beautiful line. You have the power to move the reader. Thank you for the rare privilege of reading your work. You are one of poemhunters finest. Love, SandraX