Thursday, July 13, 2006

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You were just a chubby bundle.
Just a shivering lump.
Of feather scratched skin.
Soft and peach wrinkled.
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Lauren Michaels
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Dee Daffodil 14 July 2006

Lovely poem...But you know what...I bet it's not the only good thing that you've done...Beautiful anyway. Hugs, Dee

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Séamus Fox 13 July 2006

Wow Lauren this is vivid 'every inch of me in your inchling grasp' such a beautiful word combination. Seamus

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