Gift From Heaven Comments

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, A beautiful motivational piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

This gift from heaven - you mean your life? Indeed! Break the wall of fear, pick up your strength, fill in the cracks and dance in the rain. Don't believe other people's definitions of yourself. You know your worth.

The land is drenched with the pouring rain But empty and dry, my heart remains No flowers of love kiss the blue sky Only weeds of solitude have grown up high. Barren of tender touch of green leaves A landfill of grief and stifled dreams. I need to break this wall of fear Pick up my strength and wipe my tears-A fine poetic expression of a heart yearning for love.I agree with Zaheer Uddin- You should dance in the rain for such beauty in your words.

I need to break this wall of fear Pick up my strength and wipe my tears For some drops of love to seep through And fill in the cracks of my life too. Beautiful lines. Your poems are so motivating. I enjoy reading them. Thanks for sharing.10+

you should dance in the rain - the poem is absolutely beautiful - - flows really well

Really love it.I eat this! ,

I need to break the wall of fear Pick up the strength and wipe my tears.. Hope to get filled by love from heaven above Lovely poem

Only weeds of solitude have grown up high. Barren of tender touch of green leaves A landfill of grief and stifled dreams. gathering courage and hoping a little bit of love in the creaks of sorrow..... this is a poem of great determination.......i shall not be a pray of my circumstances.. i will become great. very nice poem conveying positive vision to the reader.. thank you dear poetess. tony