Tuesday, May 15, 2012

Gibberish Comments

Rating: 4.4

Before the invention of fire
Every thing was raw.
When emotions are on fire
The signs and symbols
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Salema Khatun
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Richard Wlodarski 09 January 2017

A poem this well conceived and brilliantly expressed deserves multiple readings. Excellent write! What's gibberish to some is art to others. The title itself is well conceived. Should you have the time and inclination, please consider reading and commenting/rating some of my poetry. Thank you.

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Khairul Ahsan 16 July 2013

A pack of charged emotions. Yes, poetry is that, released through words that charge other minds too.

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 October 2012

C`est magnique! Thats only i can say for this poem above.This is your introduction and its a rocking horse winner poem with its pack of charged emotions

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The Reader 12 September 2012

You conceived it in a right order so as a creator of the poem you know better but i think, consider a little about title, because the poem is complete and very logical...you have done a very good job in this poem.

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Salema Khatun

Salema Khatun

murarai birbhum west bengal
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