Gibberish Comments

The power of these lines lies in the expectant beauty of flowers that bloom and the exquisite diversity of bird song if we stop to listen, a bird can blossom, a flower can sing, appreciation in perception is not gibberish, it gives us wings.

The last Stanza is more impressive. Beautifully executed. Five stars.

And I a flower when I behold her, And when I hear her, I have wings.... Yes, when she sings, I've wings. Lovely

This is lovely., ., ..so so lovely, its a beautiful gibberish

I appreciated the comment by Savita Tyagi, the beautiful lines took on additional possibilities, and made the title wonderfully appropriate.

She must have written it as a lullaby for her baby and as a mother I can vouch the baby must have loved it.

Gibberish, yes, but lovely gibberish indeed. At least she knew it was gibberish when she wrote it.