Saturday, May 5, 2012

Gibar Magic Comments

Rating: 3.1

A young magic man saw there was
no mountains left by this
land cos of man’s destruction
So he blow magic and said
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Lionel Fogarty
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Adeeb Alfateh 15 March 2020

Now here the magic man gave a powerful blowing magic that all storm wind and flood waters lightning disappeared and cool air SUCH A LOVELY POEM GREAT 10++

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Manonton Dalan 14 January 2016

it was spring then...heheheee

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Ratnakar Mandlik 14 January 2016

Beautiful flight of imagery has penned an entertaining poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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M Asim Nehal 14 January 2016

And he heard their thanks and smiled and a smile you will see in any Aboriginal

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Lionel Fogarty

Lionel Fogarty

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