Tuesday, March 12, 2019

Ghunghuti Comments

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Ghunghuti is a word in Sambalpuri language
This is a noun used as both singular and plural,
Very small flies basically fruit flies
Which are gnats and fungus gnats,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Flower Prince 15 March 2019

Wow! Wow! Wow! Dear darling poet, I have never heard about this Ghunghuti word for fruit fly. First time I have come across this word. This is a lovely poem darling poet Kumar. Community of gnats is really wonderful. Thank you very much for sharing. This also deserves 10.

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Mj Lemon 15 March 2019

This is an amazing verse, Kumarmani. I read this as a metaphor for humanity. We are like those flies, when we understand out station in the whole of the cosmos. May our communities be survived as 'happily.' This gem goes to myfavourites.

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Ashika Murali Acharya 14 March 2019

Wonderful observation which is very well conveyed. You have the power to add beauty to the things that we consider normal....The minute observation make the write straight to our heads.. Thank you for sharing.

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Dogma Daniman 13 March 2019

The gnats to whom you tell ghunghuti are really mysterious creatures and they are very small but very clever. This poem attracts readers like us. Nice theme you have presented through this poem.

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Kostas Lagos 13 March 2019

You made a fantastic poem out of fruit flies!

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Heather W.B. 13 March 2019

This is an amazement for me to know and learn about new words from you. Ghunghuti word is easy to remember and this is completely new to me. I agree with Douglas Scotney. These fruit flies are seen world wide. Your keen observation has brought them alive in your poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 March 2019

Ghunghuti, what profoundly minute but accurate observations. Even they have a dream. Well writ.

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Gajanan Mishra 12 March 2019

You are really very great sir, you give ghunghutI a poetic touch, namaskar sir.

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Douglas Scotney 12 March 2019

they're worldwide, KM; thanks for the new name I can call them. They love a drop of wine, too; and the way they flee your finger and sing makes them the bird of the insect world.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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