Saturday, February 20, 2016

Ghoul Comments

Rating: 5.0

Parents threatened us by the ghoul
That lives they said far in the desert
It would eat us if we challenged rule
Strangle us during nights sans alert
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Kassem Oude
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Lorraine Colon 25 February 2016

Parents use clever ways to keep the children obedient. Sometimes they scare, and sometimes they threaten the children. And it is usually effective. Children tend to believe everything they are told. But as they get older, they start to think for themselves and realize how they were lied to. But when the children grow up and become parents, they do the same thing with their children. A very entertaining poem, Kassem. I enjoyed reading it.

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