Wednesday, September 30, 2009

Ghosts Of Loves Passed Comments

Rating: 4.4

The grey ghosts of loves passed
linger near us all the time
but cannot touch
the new loves growing vine.
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David Harris
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Patti Masterman 04 October 2009

I confess I do sort of get into a 'ghostly' mood this time of year. But this is really sweet and I love how the old loves cannot touch the vines of the new loves, they are separated by time and space and the hidden dimensions of the heart that we can never see. Like this very much.

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Stephen Stirk 01 October 2009

This is a very interesting perspective, that loves lost are all around and in the vicinity of loves present. Some times I'm hoping they're not Ha Ha. You move so eloquently between comedy and deep theory. Marvellous poem. Best Steve

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Carol Gall 30 September 2009

great write david who really knows 10

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Marilyn Lott 30 September 2009

And we really don't know, do we? Anything is possible and your words certainly make us believe. Another '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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