I feel them in the winter time,
When life is cold, and time goes slow.
We shiver with cold like a silver dime,
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Whoooo, that will put the shivers down your spine. I have been moaning and fussing about the cold for 2 wks now and there you go and throw ghosts and death in to the mix. Nicely done and just right for the season. T
I love good endings and this was a good one. The last line was a keeper. It was as if the whole poem was written for that last line. This is a rare form of poetic device I seldom see. Wonderful! GW62