Tuesday, January 13, 2009

Ghosts Comments

Rating: 5.0

I feel them in the winter time,
When life is cold, and time goes slow.

We shiver with cold like a silver dime,
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John Shea
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Greenwolfe 1962 26 January 2009

I love good endings and this was a good one. The last line was a keeper. It was as if the whole poem was written for that last line. This is a rare form of poetic device I seldom see. Wonderful! GW62

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Ron Flowers 15 January 2009

A hauntingly good one, John. Ron

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Teresa Dearing 13 January 2009

Whoooo, that will put the shivers down your spine. I have been moaning and fussing about the cold for 2 wks now and there you go and throw ghosts and death in to the mix. Nicely done and just right for the season. T

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