Not so different,
But the resentments
Are oh so real,
Hatred at the past,
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Conveys obsessions wiith one's own past so well that the feeling is contagious- Am acheing with sadness and wistfulness.
Lovely. Glad to know that someone can express their feelings (and incidentally, mine) so well.
Last stanza is a humdinger! Very well done. Now we all need to cheer up and sing the song of the future, where the next love at first sight is only a blink away....... H
I've added this one to my favourite poems
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