Another fine and beautifully written senryu on display here Dominic.10++ and forgive me for asking have you or any one you know of have ever seen a ghost? I never have. For they seem to capture a poet's attention and imagination so captivatingly dearly. Many thanks and take care.
Thanks Shaun...I have not seen a ghost but on very rare occasions I have 'sensed' presences. I think I like to use the notion of ghosts and indeed angels within my poetry for their metaphorical value.