Saturday, November 18, 2006

Ghostly Doll Comments

Rating: 5.0

I bought a doll at an antique shop.
It was a place where I liked to stop.
Homeward bound, we went together.
Winter upon us ooooh stormy weather.
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Melvina Germain
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Grace Tan 24 March 2007

Haha. Just like its title, its a ghostly amusing poem. Told in a subtle way, it dosen't freak people out that bad, and yet the storyline is there. Won; t want one of those dalls though...><

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Brian Dorn 26 November 2006

Creepy stuff, Melvina... an intereasting expansion of your repertoire! Brian

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Tailor Bell 20 November 2006

spine shivers and skin prickles...scary doll. fine write, Melvina. -Tailor

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Diane Violet 18 November 2006

Spooky Melvina.........love this very well written.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 November 2006

The mystique and results of good living & unwavered Faith...Another fine tale from the Heart....Well crafted, rhythm in sync & ooh, that trademark detail a la Melvina... '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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