Thursday, June 27, 2013

Ghostly Boats Comments

Rating: 4.5

We're mostly ghostly boats with notions
Deranged, we strangely sail the oceans
Our sails prevail
On whisp ad instinct
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Ray Quesada
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Sacha Hayes O'grady 13 August 2013

I wish this poem had been longer, such is its sad sentiment. An all too brief evocation of trial and tribulation.

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