Monday, September 4, 2023

Ghosted Love Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

You stepped in and thought you were my preordained Romeo.
You wore a dress like a prince—full of stars and full of cello.
Needed to get your attention, so I wore one, too.
Praying for all the stars to align, but you broke my heart in two.
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S December 07 September 2023

this is masterfully made, from the 1st stanza to the last, it hooked me

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S S 07 September 2023

I like the association of Romeo and Juliet, what a nice poem

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Acir Eryat 07 September 2023

'Praying for all the stars to align, but you broke my heart in two.' what a beautiful line

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M H 05 September 2023

1st stanza, it already caught me, i love this

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Julrick Verallo 05 September 2023

what a wonderful poem!

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CJ DG 05 September 2023

'Is there another Romeo who'd love and want me? ' i can feel you, im lookng also, thank for this, my heart is filled

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