Tuesday, June 16, 2009

Ghost Whispers Comments

Rating: 3.5

Oh! night arrived
At black midnight
The leaves fluttered and
The trees quivered
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Dulakshi Wakista
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Prashant Shaurya 05 April 2010

a beautiful lyrical poem with such brilliant and vibrant imagery.. it seemed as if i was doing some kind of picture reading..

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Hasini Lelwala 04 April 2010

i enjoyed this a lot....i love this poem a lot my sis................

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Marie Bliss 04 April 2010

This poem has magic, I love it! Well done!

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Sandra Fowler 06 March 2010

Very dramatic. Whispers is a word that was made for poetry.10+. Always your friend, Sandra

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Iron Panda 23™ 24 February 2010

I FRIFFIN LOVED IT! ! the image was soo clear in my head...and it was soo mysterious! !

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Gone Away 22 February 2010

I love the feeling of fear described here so well and lyrically!

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John Oconnell 20 February 2010

i enjoyed this story well told. john

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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 19 February 2010

Wonderful poem dear......

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Terence George Craddock 18 February 2010

The scamper foot steps approaching Flabbergasted! Ghost haunted infront of me I petrified... And our hearts stop with you. Excellent conclusion!

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nomad omnia 15 February 2010

I love this one! A story for a stormy night: -) N

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Allemagne Roßmann 14 February 2010

The scamper foot steps approaching Flabbergasted! Very poignant write...

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Pamela Lutwyche 12 February 2010

That sounds one spooky night.

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Joanna Ratnam 18 September 2009

Hi! Dulakshi, Superb creation of atmosphere in the opening lines and yes! you had me pertrified, too! :)) Joanna

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 June 2009

hello dulakshi! ! ! hey this is a superb write indeed...great expressions... and i sort of a like thriller stuff! ! ..and this one is great! ! ! .....you can writing is excellent.... enjoyed this very much, thannks! ! ! 10+++ regards shan

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 June 2009

From melancholy to horrified arena where the shadows of the undeath unleash their horcus porcus, we stood still, whisper to each other, like the ghost whispers.Great writes Dulakshi! !

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