Oh! night arrived
At black midnight
The leaves fluttered and
The trees quivered
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i enjoyed this a lot....i love this poem a lot my sis................
Very dramatic. Whispers is a word that was made for poetry.10+. Always your friend, Sandra
I FRIFFIN LOVED IT! ! the image was soo clear in my head...and it was soo mysterious! !
I love the feeling of fear described here so well and lyrically!
The scamper foot steps approaching Flabbergasted! Ghost haunted infront of me I petrified... And our hearts stop with you. Excellent conclusion!
The scamper foot steps approaching Flabbergasted! Very poignant write...
Hi! Dulakshi, Superb creation of atmosphere in the opening lines and yes! you had me pertrified, too! :)) Joanna
hello dulakshi! ! ! hey this is a superb write indeed...great expressions... and i sort of a like thriller stuff! ! ..and this one is great! ! ! .....you can writing is excellent.... enjoyed this very much, thannks! ! ! 10+++ regards shan
From melancholy to horrified arena where the shadows of the undeath unleash their horcus porcus, we stood still, whisper to each other, like the ghost whispers.Great writes Dulakshi! !
a beautiful lyrical poem with such brilliant and vibrant imagery.. it seemed as if i was doing some kind of picture reading..