Thursday, April 3, 2008

Ghost Strings Comments

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Yielding to the ghosts of the past that haunt me,
My mind is filled with schemes,
Words that should have been said.
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Vonda Overlie
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Bri Edwards 08 September 2013

well, entanglements can be a combination of pros and cons. hopefully the speaker knows how to balance the two. i won't say don't get entangled again, but keep the clippers handy. in case this is not a true-to-your-life story (and even if it is) i congratulate you on the telling of it. thanks for sharing. bri

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David Desantis 03 April 2008

We've all felt like this. Ah the joys of love un-returned....very nice poem. I'm new to this but I liked yours alot. Check out mine if you get a chance

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