Tuesday, July 17, 2007

Ghost Of Our Love Comments

Rating: 4.4

Watching the waves rolling to the shore,
as I sit throwing pebbles into the water.
The smoke from my cigarette
drifts over my head,
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David Harris
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 17 July 2007

The ladys beat me too it my friend, beautiful write David...10

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Theresa Moore 17 July 2007

A truly beautiful love poem. The ending was a total surprise to me. '10'

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Marci Made 17 July 2007

Holy Moses, this is a beautiful love story and tribute to your love......it was going I thought, towards a different ending so I am relieved and pleased with the ending and the Ghost no longer such........excellent in my minds eye.....marci.xo

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