Ghost Comments

Beautiful writing on sleep in a context I've never considered before, even though when I was eight I woke and saw a young boy watching me, around the time my nan passed over.., food for thought indeed. Karen

yes, i like the way this one is put together. it is a interesting concept. keep up the good work. we are all looking forward to reading more of your talented work. :) ash

Astral projection. Visitation. I love the idea of the conscious mind transcending the physical body, either through death or meditation. For me this poem is potent in atmosphere.

Exactly, a man is like a dead when he is asleep. As per indian myth, the soul wonders when we are asleep.

Your poem is very nice.Ghost is your altar ego.We the Indian Hindus too believe that when we sleep our soul roams.

Very thought provoking indeed.

i like i like we are a ghost to ourselves

Excellent write... it suggests that reality is but a reflection of our dreams and vice versa! ... well done

A gentle and evocative poem. You may like to read my poem, I could not sleep, which is along a similar theme with a different take. Great work.

Exemplary! There are two type of Ghosts Dead & living!

wow that is cool! ! ! ! ! ! i wouldnt of come up with that myself..that is one of a kind! ! ! ! ! i love it! ! ! !

is true when we become insensitive and do not feel the thing around us...even the reality that many suffers because of us....then we are ghost....

is true when we become insensitive and do not feel the thing around us...even the reality that many suffers because of us....then we are ghost....

is true when we become insensitive and do not feel the thing around us...even the reality that many suffers because of us....then we are ghost....

That's a good poem, easy to understand, and make the reader think more.

sometimes i think we are all ghosts! good poem.