Thursday, November 7, 2013

Ghost Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes I see you
standing all alone out there.
I smile and wave, as you vanish
into thin air.
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Smoky Hoss
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Lorraine Colon 22 November 2013

Cling to the ghosts. Sometimes that's all that there is. Very nice poem.

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Dee Corpolongo 12 November 2013

Another wow from me...this hits me right in the heart, understanding the loss and pain felt along with the emptiness of losing a loved one. Excellent write.

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Lawerence Mize 12 November 2013

The spirit lives. Great poem.

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Valerie Dohren 07 November 2013

Really beautiful Smoky, your poem gives life to your ghost. Very well written indeed.

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