Ghost Comments

Kinda shifty themes, that were maybe meant to be vague, but in my humble opinion just seem to bore. I would get a little bit stronger of a story line/theme/idea going on so that the reader can go away holding onto something solid. There are a lot of good one liners, but all the lines don't fit together very well. I'm not trying to be harsh though, because there are very good points of the poem, and I wish you the best.

Nice poetry. Loved it flow and concept.

Beautiful poem. 'I hope the evil that Ive done doesnt cause them to fear me Really I just wish that you would be near me '

You will not regret the past nor wish to shut the door on it that feeling of uselessness will leave you. You will know peace. Sam believe in your future and your past can't hurt you. I love you brother.

Very good write and yes you will be forgiven for past sins I give you a 10 Sam please read my poem 'God Sent His Son'. I think you'll like it. Thanks