Monday, January 12, 2009

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whilst you sleep i slowly remove my arms

once so tightly wrapped around your waist
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Lewis Marrow
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Brother Jonathan Gardner 20 January 2009

Great. Really enjoyed this a lot. Keep up the good word. I like the rhythm and repetition - similar to a villanelle in style. GBY, Jonathan

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