Wednesday, October 5, 2016

Ghost Comments

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A man took a night shelter in a house,
Which was beside a graveyard but the building was huge.
Slowly the night descended,
As he was tired he slept in a bed.
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A. Bhadury
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Dr Antony Theodore 08 June 2017

ut at midnight he was restless, The ghosts touched his face. There was darkness everywhere, jumping into a river to escape from Ghosts......... in your poems there is a tendency to describe the suicide affeted people. why is it. ? you hve great imaginative capacity. develop it and write only positive poems.. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 October 2016

There was darkness everywhere! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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