To be a ghetto child
Is a challenge few surmount
For many are they who
Succumb to the temptations in the ghettos
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Now your talkin'. See my new post 04-25-09 SF Chronicle. Also 'BANG You're Dead.' Let me know what you think. You have written an authentic poem. Good job.
thanks for going through the poem. let me see the great stuff you have yourselves! I think the poem needs some editing though.