Tuesday, January 13, 2009

Ghetto Child Comments

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To be a ghetto child
Is a challenge few surmount
For many are they who
Succumb to the temptations in the ghettos
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COMMENTS
Kelvin Karani 24 October 2012

thanks for going through the poem. let me see the great stuff you have yourselves! I think the poem needs some editing though.

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Tom J. Mariani 26 April 2009

Now your talkin'. See my new post 04-25-09 SF Chronicle. Also 'BANG You're Dead.' Let me know what you think. You have written an authentic poem. Good job.

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