Ghazal-Who Bholi Bali Aurat Jab Comments

awesome gajal 10++ specially these line deserve 10+++ thanks sir sharing with us.. Jo shaiy apnon mein unqua hay who beganon mein milti hay, Muhabbat darhaqueequat sirf deewanon mein milti hay. & Who jiski chonch mein zaitoon ki ek shakh hoti thi, Who zakhmi fakhta janon na anjanon mein milti hay. Diya jo jhonpri mein jal raha hay roshni uski, Na masjid na kalisa na sanamkhaanon mein milti hay

Bahut hi khoobsoorat ghazal............................................

Outstanding Ghazal, Left me speechlessssssssssss........... Who jiski chonch mein zaitoon ki ek shakh hoti thi, Who zakhmi fakhta janon na anjanon mein milti hay. Diya jo jhonpri mein jal raha hay roshni uski, Na masjid na kalisa na sanamkhaanon mein milti hay.

Hay teri mamata chai hui sari khudai per, Tu insanon mein milti hay tu haiwanon mein milti hay. Bahut Khoob.............10

Hi - Akhtar, with my very limited knowledge, I went through your poem and I loved the essence of it. Though I don't understand all the words but the rhythm and the gist of the ghazal was too good.