Monday, November 3, 2014

Ghazal-Tanhai Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tum door they jabbhi tanha thee ab pas ho phir bhi tanha hoon,
Yeh qurbat kaisi qurbat hay main khud se batein karti hoon,
Kabhi waqt mile to sochna tum khamoshi bhi kutch kahti hay,
Main pehle kitna bolti thee ab keyun itna chup rahti hoon.
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M Asim Nehal 30 September 2015

Wow Kya baat hai badalte waqt ke sath badalte rishton ka kya khoob manzar dikha diya aapne.......... Kabhi waqt mile to sochna tum khamoshi bhi kuch kahti hay, Jo bhool gaya tha yaad aaya jo yaad aaya woh likhti hoon. Lovely..............10+++++

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Free Bird 22 August 2015

Iss ghazal ka har misra mujhy bht acha laga hae.....

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 June 2015

Bahuth khoobsurath ghazal hai aapki. Loved reading it. I also wrote one ghazal named in Tanhai. But didnt post it yet. Its my favourite topic.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 November 2014

Khoobsoorat Ghazal achi lagi pasand aai..............10

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