Ghazal In English "Have You Seen? " Comments

Extra ordinary poem. Loved it.

Wonderful ghazal

Yes this poem creates an illusions about the life and its journey. We may see the terminology used but they far from realities.10**

Who says that we both are not together Sky meets the earth, Have you seen? ....yes at horizon Who says they are happy, if together in photo frame Mouse playing with cat, Have you seen? ....Tom and Jerry isn't it. You have done enough introspection by now Heart and mind go together, Have you seen? ..... every time

" Have you seen" ? The question reverberates In the mind. The Ghazal effect works. Thanks Asimji

Heart and mind go together in a parallel plane and share love side by side. Sky meets the heave and beauty meets nature. This Ghazal poem is very amazing and brilliantly penned.

I was not fond of ghazals before now i think i can start reading

The last few words have you seen has taken this Gazal to a different level

What a wonderful gazal you have written in English it makes meeting about life and assess the realities of life it's time to ponder and do introspection thank you so much

Wonderful... Who says meeting of eyes unites the heart Dreams meet the reality, Have you seen?

You have done enough introspection by now Heart and mind go together, Have you seen? EXCELLENT

After several efforts, the hopes often die down Every efforts have achievements, Have you seen? Class poem.

Simply Superb.....I liked all couplets.5*

Another beautiful ghazal! 5 stars