Ghazal English ~ Under The Sky. Comments

Wow! .. Extremely beautiful and ever so heart moving! .. So amazingly painted! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

Never leave yourself open to this world, O' Asim, People will misuse your simplicity, under the sky. Meaningful Ghazal ....10

Well written dear poet.but only the evil would misuse your simplicity.

Fabulous ghazal

Well composed ghazal. Adorable.

Powerful words. Never offer your heart to any strangers They will return it without heed, under the sky.

loved the last two lines

BEAUTIFUL GHAZAL A 5 POINTER FROM ME Dr ASIM JI

Class ghazal. I liked it

Excellent couplet. When it rains, run and yell aloud, Nobody will see your tears, under the sky.

Fantastic...People will misuse your simplicity, under the sky.