Friday, December 12, 2014

Ghazal - Batein Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dil ne chaha ke suna doon use main bhi batein,
Yad aane lageen guzri hui bheegi ratein.
Aaj chingarian sholon mein badal jane do,
Aa bhi jao, na chali jaen sulagti ratein.
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M Asim Nehal 20 September 2015

Jeetne wale kabhi har ka chakho to maza, Zindigi keya hay yehi peyar ki dilkash matein Khamushi rat ki khushboo hay to chane do ise, Subh aayegi to kar lenge hum aisi batein. क्या बात है......इस ग़ज़ल से रात मोअत्तर हुई, खुशबू बिखरी रही सुबह तलक

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Rajnish Manga 07 August 2015

Aaj chingarian sholon mein badal jane do, Aa bhi jao, na chali jaen sulagti ratein. आज चिंगारियाँ शोलों में बदल जाने दो आ भी जाओ न चली जायें सुलगती रातें Amazing composition. Great romantic expressions lend this Ghazal a perfect stature. Thanks for sharing, Sir............10.

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Khalida Bano Ali 13 December 2014

A beautiful Ghazal..............................10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 13 December 2014

Very sweet Ghazal indeed and so beautifully rhymed with wonderful words of Batein.........10/10

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