Sunday, January 10, 2016

Ghazal-Barham Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ay kash mujhe wuh neend aaye jo rat mein phir na toote kabhi,
subh ko jab main so ke uthoon wuh bichde mujhe mil jaen sabhi.
Han abbhi jag raha hoon main jane keyun neend aati nahin,
lekin tum keyun jagte ho aa jao sula doon tumko abhi.
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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 22 August 2016

is nazm ki ek ek line anmol hai.......awesom 10++++.........................................................................

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Shahzia Batool 13 January 2016

Wistful and nostalgic...voice of many hearts having a universal appeal!

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Upendra Singh Suman 10 January 2016

Ay kash mujhe wuh neend aaye jo rat mein phir na toote kabhi, subh ko jab main so ke uthoon wuh bichde mujhe mil jaen sabhi. waah! bahut khoob, Janab Akhtar Sahab. Shukriya

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 January 2016

Such a sleep of love comes that does not break at all. What an amazing composition shared for reality of life. Really very interesting drafting shared.10

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