Sunday, June 1, 2014

Ghazal-Ab Dhoondhta Hoon Aaj Magar Lapata Hay Jee Comments

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Keyun pagalon ki tarah use dhoondhta hay ji,
Na janta hay usko na pahchanta hay ji,
Keyun tere pas rahne ko un chahta hay ji,
Ab tak samajh na paya ke keya mangta hay ji.
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M Asim Nehal 23 September 2015

Aapki ghazalein tou padh li maine sab, Na jaane phir bhi do char aur kyun maagta hai ji..... WOW...A ghazal to ponder on: : A philosopical touch Sab ke uthe to apne bhi yeh hath uth gaye, Kahte hue khuda se bhi ab kanpta hay ji.

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Khalid Saifullah 28 January 2015

Ek khoobsoorat Ghazal.........................10

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Amitava Sur 03 June 2014

Very vividly expressed the desire Jo mil sake kabhi na wohi mangta hay ji. Har shay mein ek tu hi nazar aa raha ho jab, Loved it

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Gajanan Mishra 01 June 2014

very fine writing, I like it. please read my poems and comment.

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