Saturday, February 14, 2015

Ghazal Comments

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Ghazal,
Husn ka tarze sukhan jis waqt apnata hoon main
jane mehfil ban ke khud par naaz farmata hoon main
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Rajnish Manga 14 February 2015

This poem is a wonderful treat to any lover of Urdu poetry, Words are beautiful, expressions are beautiful and the treatment according to Bah'r has been done exquisitely. Congratulations. Thanks for sharing with us: Chahe jitna bhi ghame duniya se afsurda ho dil / Tum nazar ke saamne aate ho khil jata hoon main. (Last line of the Ghazal needs some correction) .

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