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Janglon ke khatry apni jagah
Yahan To Bastion ka darr bhi hy
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Kya baat hai Mohtarma....Aapki ghazal beinteha hai aur dil pr karti asar bhi hai.....10++++ Kanton ke darmian rehta hy muskarata Gul e taza grche lahoo mn tr bhii hy Kushboo e yar jane kion katra ke guzr jati h Hamesha se khula garchy mera darr bhi h
Ahestgi se mere andar kuch toot chuka hy kb se Ay bekhabar, tujhe kuch khabar bhi hy....? A beautifully composed sonnet in Urdu.I enjoyed it Well expressed Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Yeh ek khoobsoorat nazm hay, pasand aayee..................10
This poem has all the essential elements that are needed to make it a Top Class Ghazal. Thanks for sharing it on PH. Let me repeat- Hawa bhi hy tez bht aur / Tinkon se bana mera ghar bhi hy. Simply wonderful. I have marked the poem and the poet as my favourite.
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7/22/2025 1:47:49 PM # 1.0.0
waah maza aagaya..kia kahney hain..aap k yeh purana poem mere liye taza hai...bahuth khoob...