Ghazal! Comments

mujh ko urrnay ka shoq tha hi nhi baadalon per safar mein kiya karti.. waah, ...kia sochney ka nadazz hai.....kahan sey ye soch aati hai..

Wah Wah Kya baat hai..... Dil ki baazi mein haar behtar thi phir bhala jeet kar mein kiya karti

Wonderful....Phir bhala jeet kar mein kiya karti...Beautiful ghazal... Plus...10

A beautiful ghazal tinged with gloom

A lovely ghazal! ! ! Good rhythm throughout the poem thus making it enjoyable. mujh ko urrnay ka shoq tha hi nhi baadalon per safar mein kiya karti arresting lines! ! ! The ending is fabulous! ! ! :)

each word is like pearl embedded with magnifiscent shinning. each line is marvellous confessing the truth. just witnessing last one - in the game of love the winner has to loose one's heart. beautiful ghazal.10 +++

I cannot choose one particular pair of lines to be the best one. Each line has it's own beauty. A perfect ghazal.

baadalon per safar - felt like floating in the clouds. Nice ghazal. Thank you.

Dil ki baazi mein haar behtar thi/phir bhala jeet kar mein kiya karti - - - - - -excellent verse.I think these are the keynote of the poem.